I’ve written a “senryu” in response to Colleen’s “Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge.” From Colleen, I’ve learned that a senryu is a poem including elements of love, a personal event, and irony, with a 5/7/5 syllable structure. The tone of a senryu is humorous or sarcastic.
See below* for more about Colleen’s weekly challenge.
And now for my senryu, “Heartburn.”
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my heart is on fire
I wish I were in love but
it’s indigestion
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*Colleen’s challenge for this week was to write a tanka, haiku, senryu, haibun, or cinquain poem using any words we choose, rather than the two words she usually prompts us with. Not having word prompts made my task more of a challenge!
Oh, Lori… this fabulous Senryu cracked me up! Well done. I needed that laugh. 😀
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Glad to be of service, Colleen!
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LOL! 😍
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Good humour. Great senryu
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Thanks, Hélène!
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That gave me the perfect smile to end my day. Thanks!!!!
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So glad, Bryan! Enjoy your day tomorrow!
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Hahahaha. Perfect.
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Ah, ha, ha! Although heartburn is not funny (I know, I get it all the time) this Senryu tickled me. Well done. 😀
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