My sister Lisa recently suggested I join her songwriting club. The group is given a prompt and then meets once a month to perform their new songs for each other (followed by polite applause and short critiques). Even though I get nervous performing in public, I decided to give it a whirl.
What’s the worst that can happen, I asked myself. I’ll be on Zoom, and if I can tell by their faces that my song really sucks, I’ll just mute myself and blame it on my computer!
This month’s prompt is Home. That’s a pretty broad topic. Maybe a little too broad, I thought. And for an entire day or two, I wracked my brain trying to come up with a clever idea. I even made this list of phrases using the word “home,” hoping it would lead me somewhere:
But that list just led me in circles. In desperation, I sat down at my piano keyboard. Now, mind you, my piano skills are somewhere between beginner and advanced beginner. But sometimes my fingers accidentally land on notes that lead me to a song idea. This time, it worked.
I played a couple of simple chords, and – lo and behold – some words popped into my head. I hate to admit it, though: they were pretty dumb words. The words were:
“Since my baby left me.”
Yeah, I know, that’s been done before (in the song “Heartbreak Hotel”). But what good is a good song lyric if you can’t steal it, I asked myself.
Just so I wouldn’t be sued by the estate of Thomas Durden, who wrote Heartbreak Hotel, I decided to give my song a more positive twist. Somehow, I’d turn heartbreak into happiness.
Writing a song about heartbreak turned on its head was difficult. The struggle was real, as these pictures will demonstrate:
In the end, I DID manage to come up with something positive, and, I think, positively funny. Here’s what I’ve got so far for my new song, “Home Alone”:
So now you know a few of my songwriting secrets, and also what happened “since my baby left me.”
P.S. The song above is a work of FICTION. My baby didn’t leave me, and I don’t like being home alone!
This is post #3 in this year’s #NaBloPoMo challenge, a.k.a. #NanoPoblano. To follow my blog, just click below where it says “Follow loristory.”
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Oh Lorrie, you are such a good writer, your posts are amusing and fun to read! I loved reading about your journey with your song writing and how you could use mute and blame your computer connection if you got cold feet. I love all the energy you put into your endeavors. So cool 🙂
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Thank you!
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Of course 🙂
I remember when you were moving! Gosh that’s a long time ago now… my memory is failing me in a lot of ways though. Anyways, always keep up the writing, and the song writing 🙂
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This is really impressive!! I have a hard enough time writing a blog post I can’t even imagine writing a song!
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Thanks! I think I can do it because my dad once wrote a song and took me with him when he went to New York City to try and get it published. (I was only 12.) He was my role model when it came to songwriting. Unfortunately, he never got his song published. It was a Christmas song called “Dear Santa” – a big hit at our house!
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Great club idea! I would approach “home” as protecting Mother Earth 🌏💚🎶
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I’ve written lyrics to a couple songs a friend of mine wrote, but I’ve got almost no musical talent, so I commend you on being able to come up with both the lyrics and music for songs. It is probably a lot harder than most people realize.
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